Wednesday, September 16, 2009
I agree with David Baranch with his unique view of how the world works as well as the way people view. He fully explained how a person can simply look directly at someone else yet might feel something completly different. Also how looks can be very deceiving and that just looking at someone else cannot reveal exactly how that individual may necessarily feel.
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Would have liked your post to be longer. The last sentence looks like you're about to shoot off into something interesting here but the blog post just ends there. There is nothing to argue with or agree with. I hope the next post is this short, makes my job a lot easier.
ReplyDeleteDear Jerald,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you got straight to the point of whether you agreed or disagreed with David Banach's view. Also how you explained his view and what it meant to you.
I think that you could have put in some quotes by banach and elaborated more on how his ideas make you feel. I think that when you say "looks can be very decieving and that just looking at someone else cannot reveal exactly how that individual may necessarily feel." you could have explained more what you meant through a personal experience or used something that happened in the world.
You post left me hanging like you had so much more to say yet it wasn't written down.
--Brittany